WALT - Write an interesting and engaging recount
Today room 1, made a recount plan about camp and step up. Year 7's had to do step up , but year 8's were so lucky because they went to camp.
Your recount is very descriptive and detailed and reminded me of my experience on the railway digger at Thames. Luckily for me, my husband did most of the work. What are you going to do to make your arms do a better job for you next time?
Hi Teresa Golder, Thank you for the comment. I think Next time I am going to work on my arms so that it can get stronger and better. So when I go back to Thames I don't need any problems with my arms.
Shot Junior keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteYour recount is very descriptive and detailed and reminded me of my experience on the railway digger at Thames. Luckily for me, my husband did most of the work. What are you going to do to make your arms do a better job for you next time?
ReplyDeleteHi Teresa Golder, Thank you for the comment. I think Next time I am going to work on my arms so that it can get stronger and better. So when I go back to Thames I don't need any problems with my arms.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment!